With internet improvements, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a positive or negative development?

Recently, with internet refinements,
people
have the ability to post their
reviews
about the
products
or services they have purchased. While there are some drawbacks of
this
trend, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
To begin
with, the main drawback of allowing
people
to write their opinions is that sometimes lead to misleading information.
This
is because some
people
might buy
products
or services that they do not actually need ;
as a result
, due to their resentment feeling, they might post online
reviews
stating that certain product
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instance, is irrelevant and not worth buying.
Secondly
, these online
reviews
could be exploited by rival corporations to manipulate
people
.
For instance
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mobile phone websites, some company’s
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might swarm negative
reviews
about other
companies
products
, which might not be true in essence;
consequently
, if many
people
believe these claims, they probably will not buy
this
product. Having said that , online
reviews
are most likely
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enhancing the quality of
products
and services .
This
is due to fact that many
companies
around the world read
user
opinions , and thoroughly investigate
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these
reviews
;
thus
, if these
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user
claims are true, these
companies
start to rectify possible issues found, resulting in positive
products
produced afterwards.
For example
, many software
companies
such
Apple
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,
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relies on
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user
feedback to continuously improve their software. An additional advantage is that some
people
with technical
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give honest
reviews
about the
products
on their accord, which in turn worthwhile for
companies
, and for users to be able to briefly distinguish between
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of
products
easily.
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of conclusion ,
although
online
user
reviews
have some downsides
such
as causing
mislead
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information, I consider it to be positive development overall as it
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to better quality over
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time.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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