The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.

In recent years,
diseases
are spreading fastly in our countries, especially in young generations.
However
,
governments
are spending a considerable part of their income to restore citizens' health despite holding back these
diseases
.
This
essay will argue about
this
statement.
To begin
with, these days, the rate of
diseases
is escalating due to a lack of carefulness by
governments
. Many
diseases
onset due to some basics needs to survive like water, food, proper medication. Research published in the BBC newspaper shows a comparison about hepatitis percentage in various countries where clean water is provided or not. In some countries where pure water is accessible for
people
, the ratio of disease is nearly negligible,
although
others have been a significant ratio. Similar in that region, their authorities fail to implement the laws to disperse medical equipment is higher in HIV
diseases
.
In addition
,
governments
and medics focus on enhancing the body's immunity rather than treating it. If a men's body has immunity against
diseases
,
then
his body able to counteract disease.
For example
, in the
last
years, a covid 19 pandemic hit the world at the speed of sound. It diagnosed that those
people
with less immunity in their bodies had many chances to die, and others had much chance to survive.
Governments
need to enforce the doctor, and other medical officers start to suggest to
people
how they save themselves from illness and switch their budget from treating to preventing. In conclusion, some areas lack facilities to cause chronic
diseases
, while these are basic for living, and
people
need to enhance their stamina against some pandemics.
Submitted by mhassam7576 on

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