It seems clear that obesity in today's society is to come extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed?
It has seen, from people around the world, that obesity is on the rise due to many factors. One of the main causes can be considered the cuisine habit change in mankind. There are some efforts that the government can do to decrease the availability of junk food,
for example
, by demanding taxes on them. Linking Words
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such
policies might not be beneficial as the way it was intended to be at the Linking Words
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place.
According to the lack of time in the modern lifestyle, which lead to the preference in choosing junk food over the healthy diet, the demand in using fast foods is soaring. Linking Words
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, designating taxes by the government might be useful at a percentage, especially with the individuals who are more concerned with buying low-cost foods, but since there is no declaration for the reason there would be not quite helpful. As it can be seen in different expensive products, Linking Words
for instance
, gold jewellery, clothes with famous brands, making them more expensive might even have an impact on becoming trendy and even one good attempt for showing off.
Making people more aware of the appropriate choices in food production would be effective. Linking Words
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attempt can be achieved through advertisements, documentaries, or Linking Words
also
in the big titles in magazines and newspapers. By having more knowledge in how to live a healthier life, society would rather choose a foodstuff which is rich in vitamins and minerals, containing low fat Linking Words
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of high, that all will make Linking Words
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shift in their appetite more reasonable. Linking Words
For example
, It can be seen recently, as the people are becoming more concerned for their planet by the advertisements that have been shown the great hazard in the universe.
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it can be seen in some areas that their main policy is forbidding or rising the price of a product, in order to vanish the request of it. I strongly disagree with it and I acknowledge that always explaining the issue and helping others to realize the danger of their condition would be more effective.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...