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Doctors recommend that older people should exercise regularly. However, many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them?

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These days old generation
do
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 not do physical
exercises
 enough.
However
, doctors say to them that older
people
 should do
exercises
 on a daily basis. There are various reasons for
this
, elderly
people
 and medics both and need to work together to improve the situation. One of the main causes of the
problem
 is that elderly
peope
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people
 cannot exercise due to
the
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 worst health. A solution is for the
problem
 to see a doctor to start treatment which helps to be ready for physical
exercises
. It would hopefully lead to a return to the sport and running.Another factor is that elders avoid
the
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sport which can hurt their
body
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.
They
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 afraid to damage their body.To tackle
this
 issue that they overcome fear and be
carefull
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careful
 to do athletic
exercises
. The
third
 cause of the
problem
 is that older
people
 are lazy to exercise these sports and jogging. Which would solve
this
problem
 that
olders
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holders
elders
older
 want to play sports with desire and improve their discipline. To sum up there are various reasons for
this
 rise in returning sports which old generation want to be in shape. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the
problem
 lies with both elderly
people
 and doctors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivation
  • physical limitations
  • lack of time
  • fear of injury
  • exercise facilities
  • misunderstanding
  • benefits of exercise
  • social support
  • poor health conditions
  • awareness
  • appropriate exercises
  • guidance
  • financial constraints
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