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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor?

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Introduction
The main reason
of
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poverty
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 is a disparity in the resource distribution in the world. While the rich
people
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 become richer, persons who were classed as poor lose an already low income simultaneously with the
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 chance of improving their lives.
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, the ways of solving
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 problem should include a restriction of
an
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 income of some categories of individuals and
sustenance
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 of oppressed with any circumstances citizens.
Body paragraph 1
In the beginning, I would like to consider the reasons for the
poverty
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 phenomenon.
People
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 who already have an access to getting some resources often
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 have an insurmountable desire to multiple their capital for personal usage or an inheritance.
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 striving underlies
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 kinds of crime, as corruption and severe abuse of authority.
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, apart from the constantly rising number of destitute
people
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, some of them become even grindingly poor and can not cover the simplest basic needs.
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, extremely needy
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 don't have the opportunity to get an education and have to take low-qualified jobs or scrounge and pilfer.
Body paragraph 2
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, I think, that the severity of the
poverty
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 issue demands
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implementation of some steps immediately. The main point to introduce is a prohibition of receiving illegally acquired inheritance and setting an upper limit of inherited money and property. An inability to transfer property to children or other relatives will significantly reduce the number of stolen resources. The rest of the money should be donated to charity.
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 tangible cash injections into the social sphere are able not only to provide poorer individuals with a basic revenue
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 but
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 a guarantee them getting skills for better job opportunities.
Conclusion
To sum up, I would like to say, that the problem of
poverty
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 mainly stems from improper wealth distribution. So the main steps should an eradication of illegal inheritance and application of saved money for charity in the social sphere.

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