Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes . What are problem caused by that ? what solution can be given.

In
this
contemporary era,
advertisement
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advertisements
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become ubiquitous all around the world . It is irrefutable that
advert
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adverts
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promote
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common folk to purchase different things . There are several problems owing to
this
trend .
However
, some effective measures can be
implimented
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implemented
to overcome the issue of
advertisement
which
influeneces
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influences
influence
the masses . Both the aspects are articulated in
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trail
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paragraph . Analysing the issues that arise, the
first
and foremost reason is that
advertisement
attract mankind to buy that
ptoducts
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products
product
with
different
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a different
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scheme . To cite an example, they use
well known
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celebrity
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celebrities
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to represent the
product
.
Therefore
, not only rich
people
of society buy that
product
, but economically poor
people
also
buy that
product
to go with
current
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trend .
Furthermore
, sometimes
advertisement
companies
portrays
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the wrong information about the
product
during
advertisement
and
people
become more
attract
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attracted
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to that
product
.After purchasing that
product
, they feel dissatisfaction .
Moreover
,
company
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the company
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provide more discount on products and
also
children become
subborn
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stubborn
.
On the contrary
, some steps must be implemented to rectify these
predicuments
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predicaments
.
To begin
with ,
government
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the government
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should ban that advert
who
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that
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wrongly attract the
people
. To exemplify ,
government
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the government
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banned the
adverticement
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advertisement
of
cigarette
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cigarettes
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in some
state
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states
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of
india
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, who is injurious for human health .
In addition
to
this
advert
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company should not
dipict
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depict
the
product
in which children pressurise their parents to buy
that products
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that product
those products
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. On the close scrutiny , I conclude that there are numerous products created due to the advertisements and government
also
take strict action
againstit
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against it
against
.
This problems
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cannot only solve by higher authority but common folk should
also
give
theit
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their
the
that
time and efforts to overcome
this
issue.
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