Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

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While many
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believe that adverts aim to persuade
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is still very effective, others say that
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are no longer influenced by them because they are everywhere nowadays.
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I agree with the fact that advertising is so common, In my opinion, it remains a successful way to persuade consumers.
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of all, product's promotion is vital to the success of any service, show and
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invention, because to make
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buy whatever one offers, one needs to let the potential customer know where to get it. Because of
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fundamental marketing rule, we are constantly borbanded with publicity in any form or shape possible and many
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think to have become immune to their persuasive power as they no longer pay any attention to it.
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, seeing products publicised on television, the internet, phones and of course in the street is nothing new, so when
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see it they simply move on without taking any notice.
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is why advertising is no longer as effective as it once was.  Many other
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argue that those who think that advertisements are no longer successful at persuading us because they are so common is a big mistake and it is not true. Advertising strategies are in constant evolution and every so often new ways to persuade us are used and most of the time we do not realise to be exposed to an avert.
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, social media personalities,
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known as influencers, are constantly promoting new products in any of their videos or posts without a clear disclaimer,
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as the clothes or sunglasses they were wearing by a particular brand and so on.
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demonstrates that adverts still persuade us successfully.  To conclude, the marketing of products is an art in continuous evolution. in my opinion, advertising is successful more than ever before, and, whether we like it or not, tells us what we should buy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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