Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A number of people argue that

home

-schooling is best for a child's development.

However

,

other

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others

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think that traditional

schools

bring more benefits to

students

. I agree with the laters as I believe that education should be carried out by professionals. In the following short essay, both sides will be discussed and analysed.

Firstly

, for some parents teaching at

home

is a

benefitial

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beneficial

practice for

children

,

this

may be true for practical reasons.

To begin

,

children

will learn what their parents want to,

for example

, a catholic family would want their

children

to be raised with the same

moral

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morals

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as them, and, public

schools

are not allowed to teach religion.

In addition

, study at

home

can be seen as safer because

students

do not have to leave

home

, they are not exposed to traffic or violence in the streets or

schools

,

this

is particularly positive for

children

with some kind of disability, they will not be

threated

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treated

threatened

by bulliers.

However

, some other people support traditional

schools

as they have been proven practical for years. Teaching is a profession and a vocation,

that is

why it should be carried out by professionals prepared to do it.

Children

in

schools

learn from different perspectives and can build their own view of the world,

besides

, they learn other social

skill

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skills

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that they may lack if they do not leave

home

.

For instance

, one learns how to interact with others in breaks or when the lessons are finished. To complement, being at school keeps

students

away from distractions at

home

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homes

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such

as video games or television, it is better for their educational process to stay in a place adapted for that purpose. To conclude, even though there are reasons in favour of both positions, in my

opinion

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the benefits of traditional

schools

outweight

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outweigh

the

home

-schooling.

Students

learn not just about science but social skills that can hardly be taught at

home

,

besides

they are watched and accompanied by professional teachers.