Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that it is the duty of
parents
to make their Use synonyms
children
perfect humans of a community, Use synonyms
while
there are others who believe have the responsibility to do Linking Words
this
. Linking Words
However
, I am of the opinion that both can play inevitable roles Linking Words
to build
up Change preposition
in building
children
as great human beings.
On the one hand, many think Use synonyms
children
can get every life lesson from their family members, especially from elders. It is absolutely true that learning can start from the family and the socialization process Use synonyms
also
begins from a very early age or Linking Words
inherited
from elders. Add a missing verb
is inherited
Children
can learn social values, ethical knowledge, good behaviour and so on from their Use synonyms
parents
that are handy for their cognition. Family is Use synonyms
a
first platform that provides basic and informal learning to Correct article usage
the
children
. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
children
's mental health and behaviour depend on their Use synonyms
parents
' attitude.
Use synonyms
Conversely
, educational institutions Linking Words
such
as schools, Linking Words
daycares
Correct word choice
and daycares
also
contribute to making Linking Words
children
better human beings. Use synonyms
For instance
, after Linking Words
admitting
to the school, young minds get huge surroundings Wrong verb form
being admitted
such
as teachers, peers and so on. They can meet various people with different views and backgrounds Linking Words
that
attempt to develop their socialization process from that stage itself. The rules and regulations in these institutions can make them more disciplined. Correct pronoun usage
who
Moreover
, schools can teach students how to be good future leaders. Obeying pedagogues' instructions might Linking Words
further
improve Linking Words
the
tolerance levels Change the word
their
that
can help them in their careers eventually.
Correct pronoun usage
which
To conclude
, it should be considered that people are in debt to their families and educational institutions because our attitudes, views, philosophy and ideologies are shaped Linking Words
up
by them. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, I believe despite people having different views on Linking Words
this
topic, it is not only Linking Words
parents
' responsibility but Use synonyms
also
schools are responsible Linking Words
to make
them ideal human beings.Change preposition
for making
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