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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

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The table demonstrates detailed information about customers spending their money on a variety of items in five different countries in 2002. Overall, The highest consumption of food and drinks goes to Turkey, whilst the lowest is in Swede. Another point
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 is the ratio of leisure and
education
 is quite different compared to Turkey ,
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 Swede hit the lowest in terms of clothing while Italy made it to the top.
First
 of all, the rate of the five different countries is quite different compared to each other. Ireland hit above a quarter in terms of food and drinks, but for
education
 and leisure had a 2.21% while for clothing had a 6.43%.
On the other hand
, Italy hit 16.36% in drinks, whilst in clothing slightly above Ireland by two and a half per
cent
, and one per
cent
 in
education
. Spain and Sweden
education
 and clothing were different by nearly one per
cent
. Turkey scores one of the highest in tobacco
however
 it was average
in contrast
 to other countries in terms of clothing and was quite high in leisure two per
cent
 compared to Ireland.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer expenditure
  • Economic health
  • Housing
  • Nutrition
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Leisure
  • Transportation
  • Spending patterns
  • Disposable income
  • Demographics
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial literacy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax rates
  • Recession
  • E-commerce
  • Sustainability
  • Budgeting
  • Cost of living
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