The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that

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the

government

should funding to the

parents

who

has

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little

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a little

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kid

,

therefore

, one of them can be full time look

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after

fater

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their

kid

. I think there are certain advantages and disadvantages

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this

scheme is

isseu

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issued

by the

government

.

To begin

with the advantages, I believe that

this

policy could reduce the

strggle

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struggle

and brings happiness to the family which had a new baby because in most

parents

have the

difficaltie

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difficulties

difficulty

difficult

to look after a new baby

such

as

finacial

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financial

,work and family balance .

For example

, when I have my

first

children

, my wife and I ware struggled

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the work timetable and

lookafter

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look after

the little

kid

,

especily

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especially

with our

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finacial

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financial

. So, If we could have

this

policy, we would

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better

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and happier situation

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us

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.

Moreover

, it brings some benefits to the young

children

such

as better care and

establish

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remarkble

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remarkable

memorey

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memory

in their

chilhood

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childhood

with their

parents

, because I believe that

no body

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nobody

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can look after the

children

better

then

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their

parents

.

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, if the

parents

had the funding the little

kid

can

built

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up

strong

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relationship

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with their

parents

because the parent

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have always

go

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to work.

On the other hand

, there are some

drewbacks

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drawbacks

for

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this

policy.

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of all, it will cost the nation extra budge and

ont

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not

fair for the residence who

dose

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not has

children

but they have to pay the tax. Sconed,

this

program might

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some people being lazy and the population might

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rapidly because they might

continuaing

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continuing

to have a baby

becouse

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because

of the

the

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money from the

government

. To sum up, I believe there some

postive

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positive

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affect

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and

nagative

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negative

fact to different people the

government

should take serious cosidareat to

this

program.