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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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 and social websites, people have got the advantage of being connected with each other across the world.
However
, it has created problems especially for teenagers by making them vulnerable. I strongly agree that parents should control
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internet
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 when it comes to their
children
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 is accessible to most
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people nowadays, it is very evident that
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not all who are using
internet
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 are of good intentions and use it mostly to satisfy their evil deeds and for these,
children
 who are not fully aware of these sinister intended people, become an easy target. They lure them by offering a short film or photoshoot and
then
 engage them in foul
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 like making obscene videos or images.
Thus
, it is imperative that parents should have an eye on their
children
’s
internet
 usage.
Furthermore
, on social media there are many ads floating everywhere related to online games or any other product which seems very attractive to the
children
 and without understanding the consequence, they try to buy the product which exposes them to the attackers.
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entering the personal card details on a suspicious website gives
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access to the hacker to hack all the money from the account.
Hence
, parents should always look after the
children
’s activity especially when they are trying to buy or sell something on
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. To conclude,
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 is very important if it is used in a proper way and in
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 of
children
, it is parent’s responsibility to always check how their
children
 are using the
internet
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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