In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular ? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas ?

In many different parts of the world, there are very few genres when it comes to movies, TV shows or theatre which are liked by
majority
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the majority
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of the audience and out of those,
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the crime
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genre is one of them.
People
engage themselves with
this
through
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two ways, either by watching dramas or by reading novels
which
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are based on
crime
.
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essay narrates my personal view in terms of why
people
find these shows or books attractive. In my opinion,
crime
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the crime
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genre is more famous
within
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younger
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the younger
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generation as it gives them a thrilling experience. They get entertained by watching different TV series which are based on crimes and
also
in some cases where they don’t like watching TV, they entertain themselves by reading novels. Other
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of
people
apart from youngsters who like
crime
shows or reading
crime
based novels have a different image. For them,
this
is more of getting an understanding of those
people
’s mentality who
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playing the part of criminals.
That is
, they are more interested in knowing the reason behind
such
criminal activity
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instance,
person
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the person
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who is playing the character might have suffered violence in his/her childhood or his younger days were full of struggle where he/she found difficulties in fulfilling his/ her basic requirements. Another category of
people
who have an inclination towards
crime
based shows
are
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generally not of good intentions. They watch these
type
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types
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of dramas to get an idea which they can implement in their
real life
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by threatening
people
in order to take any kind of revenge or to perform any malicious activities. To conclude, I believe that
people
should watch shows or read books which are
crime
based
,
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if they consider
this
only for their entertainment purpose.
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