Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Computerized
information
cause many changes in our day-to-day lives and undoubtedly an indispensable part of our profession, entertainment, and household. It is undeniable that developing technology has drawbacks while
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our lifestyles day by day.
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that the advantages of
information
technologies
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its
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drawbacks.
To begin
with, many of us using IT during our daily business
life
. Many
people
use computers for
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actives
such
as
to send
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mail, attend meetings, store
information
and create presentations. Nobody can deny that archiving
information
was a challenging task for organisations before computers. But now with the help of cloud
technologies
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it is easy to access all
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one click.
Nevertheless
, there are some drawbacks regarding
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but
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various developments on the way to improve the progress.
In addition
, many
people
using smart
devices
as part of their
life
.
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network integrated
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household
devices
or wearable
technologies
became very popular recently. It is possible to access
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our smart cleaning device with help of our watch and to clean the house while we are spending our
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outside with our loved ones.
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devices
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our lives easier and thanks to
this
improvement as
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people
who live
in
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a
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busy
life
we can find time more
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.
However
, many
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warn
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against electromagnetic waves emitted from electrical products can
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human brains and health. I believe that with advancement in IT harmless effect of technological
devices
can reduce in recent years. In conclusion, despite a few downsides with the help of
information
technologies
people
are able to live a
life
more productive and to take more time to themselves. I firmly believe that
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of technological advancement will reduce with the increase of knowledge and experience.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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