Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Computerized
information
cause many changes in our day-to-day lives and undoubtedly an indispensable part of our profession, entertainment, and household. It is undeniable that developing technology has drawbacks while improve
our lifestyles day by day. Change the verb form
improving
This
essay entirely agrees
that the advantages of Change the verb form
agree
information
technologies
outweighs
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outweigh
its
drawbacks.
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their
To begin
with, many of us using IT during our daily business life
. Many people
use computers for varies
actives Replace the word
various
such
as to send
mail, attend meetings, store Change the verb form
sending
information
and create presentations. Nobody can deny that archiving information
was a challenging task for organisations before computers. But now with the help of cloud technologies
it is easy to access all Add a comma
,technologies
informations
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information
pieces of information
just
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with just
in
one click. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, there are some drawbacks regarding cyber security
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cybersecurity
but
various developments on the way to improve the progress.
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forbut
In addition
, many people
using smart devices
as part of their life
. For
example
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,example
network integrated
household Add a hyphen
network-integrated
devices
or wearable technologies
became very popular recently. It is possible to access to
our smart cleaning device with help of our watch and to clean the house while we are spending our Change preposition
apply
times
outside with our loved ones. Fix the agreement mistake
time
In other words
network connected
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network-connected
devices
makes
our lives easier and thanks to Change the verb form
make
this
improvement as a
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apply
people
who live in
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apply
a
busy Correct article usage
apply
life
we can find time more ourselves
. Change preposition
for ourselves
However
, many scientist
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scientists
warn
against electromagnetic waves emitted from electrical products can Change the verb form
warns
Correct your spelling
affect
effect
human brains and health. I believe that with advancement in IT harmless effect of technological Correct your spelling
affect
devices
can reduce in recent years.
In conclusion, despite a few downsides with the help of information
technologies
people
are able to live a life
more productive and to take more time to themselves. I firmly believe that cons
of technological advancement will reduce with the increase of knowledge and experience.Correct article usage
the cons
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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