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Some people think that a large amount of time and money should be spent on the protection of wild animals while other think that is should be better spent on the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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In recent years,
many attentions
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 have been drawn
on
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protection
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 of wildlife.
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 some
people
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 believe that
people
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 should spend a large amount of
time
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 and
money
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 on human beings, I would argue that wild
animals
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 deserve
people
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 to input their
time
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 and
money
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 up to a point. On the one hand, those who believe spending
money
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 and
time
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 on humans is better might argue that
people
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 are an important component of
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nature, and they can affect the development of
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society
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. The government has
responsibility
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 to put their budget on the improvement of
quality
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the quality
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 of
people
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’s life in order to have a better
society
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.
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, the governments of developing countries should take their
time
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 and
money
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 to help the poverties who struggle for life.
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, if these governments decide to put a large amount of their
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 and
money
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on
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 wild
animals
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, many poor
people
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 will suffer from
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 life.
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, my view is that
people
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 should spend some
money
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 and
time
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 on
protection
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the protection
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 of wildlife. The reason for
this
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 is that those
animals
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 are important in the ecosystem. For
instant
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, some wild
animals
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such
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 as frogs and birds are quite essential in the food chain. They can eat pests so that
people
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 do not need to worry about the damage to farms
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caused by pests.
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, if government spend
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 portion of
budget
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the budget
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 on
human
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the human
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 population and do not pay attention to the wildlife,
people
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 can build a better
society
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, but there will be
extinctions
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extinction
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 of some wild species. In conclusion,
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 spending
money
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 and
time
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 on population can help the development of
society
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, I believe that
people
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 should spend some
money
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 and
time
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 on
protection
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the protection
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 of wild
animals
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 in order to have a better ecosystem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem stability
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • eco-tourism
  • scientific research
  • moral and ethical responsibility
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • financial cost
  • social issues
  • healthcare
  • education
  • fund allocation
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