People who start a university course but do not complete it should be fined. Do you agree or disagree?

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Recently, extensively attention has been put on the education problem. Some people argue that
students
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who are not able to finish their
course
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at university should be punished. I do not agree with
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viewpoint. In
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essay, I will give some detailed explanations to support my opinion. 
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of all, those
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having unfinished courses should not be fined because some individuals can have inevitable reasons
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as financial pressure.
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,
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who are lack financial support may not be able to put all their energy and time into
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. If a student is from an economically disadvantaged family, they may need to find a part-time job to pay their tuition fees.
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, they have to balance their work and
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life. In
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case, they may have problems with their
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, and cannot finish the
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Furthermore
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, punishment on people who not complete the courses should not be applied because
students
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have the right to determine what they would like to
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.
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, a student in his/her
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year may register in various courses because they are not sure what subject they are interested in. So, it is possible that they could quit a
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after having started it because they find they are not interested in that
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. If
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is the situation, I do not think the student who is trying to find their interests should be punished. In conclusion, those individuals who are not able to complete a
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after starting it should not be fined because they may not be able to finish the
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due to financial pressure or their preferences.
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