Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Teenage is a growing stage and
different
phase in everybody's life. We cannot understand Correct article usage
a different
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what they want and how they want.Correct word choice
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Therefore
a fair amount of people Linking Words
believes
that teenage guys are frequently arguing with their Correct subject-verb agreement
believe
parents
for no reason and I would like to express my viewpoints on the same.
To embark on, It is quite common for youth to have a fight with their Use synonyms
parents
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, When the father rejects the college Linking Words
student
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and
they will start arguing with each other and it may end up in silence for a longer time. Correct word choice
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Secondly
, when the college student Linking Words
found
something Wrong verb form
finds
on
the eCommerce market and Change preposition
in
then
they will Linking Words
make
demand their Verb problem
apply
parents
to buy that product as soon as possible and it may be very expensive or not required, Use synonyms
hence
the mother can say no to the product. Linking Words
And
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Last
last
but not least, a father Linking Words
wanted
to know how the Wrong verb form
wants
kids
are performing in academics and even for Use synonyms
this
matter Linking Words
kids
will get very angry Use synonyms
on
their Change preposition
with
parents
. Use synonyms
For example
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parents
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are going
to college on Wrong verb form
go
daily
basis to know about the exam results ,Correct article usage
a daily
for
which Change preposition
apply
kids
may think negatively about Use synonyms
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parents
observations. As per a recent Google survey ,findings most of the Change noun form
parents'
parent's
kids
are not happy with their Use synonyms
parents
when they are over-focused on them.
Use synonyms
However
, undoubtedly, The present generation is growing in the most advanced technological society. Both Linking Words
parents
must understand some of the basic needs of their Use synonyms
kids
and allow them to buy and own them.Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
kids
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also
need to Linking Words
educate
on their Wrong verb form
be educated
family
financial position and the need for their offer. It means, before buying anything kid must think twice about how best it will be necessary to me.And Change noun form
family's
last
but not Linking Words
the
least, the entire family need to go out and have some outings, which can help them bring together and understand more.
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apply
To sum up
, we are doing everything for our Linking Words
kids
and sometimes they may not understand Use synonyms
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our parent
parent
feelings. Fix the agreement mistake
parents
Finally
, being a father we need a little bit of time to understand more about Linking Words
kids
and not to show any angry emotion Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
to
kids
.Use synonyms
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