The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrated the
wave-energy
machine
's design and location.
There are 2 chambers in the wave-energy
machine
. The upper part contains a turbine and allows the air
flow
in and out between the bottom Fix the infinitive
to flow
chamber
and the atmosphere. The bottom chamber
allows the water flow
in with the wave direction. The Fix the infinitive
to flow
wave-energy
machine
has an electricity generator which connected
to the turbine. When the water Add a missing verb
is connected
flows
into the bottom chamber
, the water level rised
which Correct your spelling
rises
rise
rose
cause
Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
air
flows
into the upper chamber
. The air
flows
though
the upper Correct your spelling
through
chamber
to atmosphere
and there Add an article
the atmosphere
also
air
flows
in from the atmosphere to the chambers.
The location options of the wave-energy
machines are essential to the output result. When the machine
placed
on the shallow coast, since there are small waves, the output would be low, Add a missing verb
is placed
however
, the costs of installation would be also
low. In contrast
, higher
output would Add an article
the higher
been
received when the Change the verb form
be
machine
is placed far from the coast. Of couse
, the costs of installation would be high.Correct your spelling
course
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave-energy, machine, air, chamber, flows with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 2 times.
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