The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrated the
wave-energy
machine
's design and location. There are 2 chambers in the
wave-energy
machine
. The upper part contains a turbine and allows the
air
flow
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to flow
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in and out between the bottom
chamber
and the atmosphere. The bottom
chamber
allows the water
flow
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to flow
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in with the wave direction. The
wave-energy
machine
has an electricity generator which
connected
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is connected
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to the turbine. When the water
flows
into the bottom
chamber
, the water level
rised
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rises
rise
rose
which
cause
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causes
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air
flows
into the upper
chamber
. The
air
flows
though
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through
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the upper
chamber
to
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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and there
also
air
flows
in from the atmosphere to the chambers. The location options of the
wave-energy
machines are essential to the output result. When the
machine
placed
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is placed
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on the shallow coast, since there are small waves, the output would be low,
however
, the costs of installation would be
also
low.
In contrast
,
higher
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the higher
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output would
been
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be
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received when the
machine
is placed far from the coast. Of
couse
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course
, the costs of installation would be high.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words wave-energy, machine, air, chamber, flows with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 2 times.

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