Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others believe it does not help shoppers much. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Today we recognize a dominant of

technology

with

omnipresence

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the omnipresence

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of intelligent devices in our life. With their help, some customers report that they have a better experience in shopping while others don't appreciate it. Personally, I incline to the

first

point of view whereas I still give the reasonable opinions of both sides.

To begin

with,

fruit

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the fruit

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of

technology

such

as online shopping definitely assists to simplify the shopping process while the customers have more beneficial services. Indeed, virtual markets present

wider

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a wider

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number of goods with various price

level

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levels

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, allowing

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the customer

a customer

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customer

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customers

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to compare the cost and the quality of

same

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the same

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kind of products, especially through the public feedback and range of the other buyers.

Besides

, with

virtual

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a virtual

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assistant

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assistants

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, they can find more quickly and exactly the issues suitable for their demands. Online shopping foundations not only broaden the options but

also

expand the geographical scale of purchasing when now

customer

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customers

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can add in their online bag products from other countries and waiting for the delivery

man

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manship

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ship

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to ship

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the packet right on the front door.

Moreover

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the modern technologies nowadays present the online wallet. It means the clients can pay through the mobile banking app by

enter

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entering

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a security password or scan the QR code.

Therefore

they don't have to keep the cash with them, avoiding

to

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apply

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the robber action.

However

, some people say that using

technology

on shopping does not help them it could

be understand

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understand

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apply

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it

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is

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why there are sometimes incidents happening with our device,

such

as

losing

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loss

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of internet or lag in processing purchasing activities.

Additionally

, there are some types of good are

also

hardly

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hard

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to buy online,

for

example

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,example

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clothes and foods. Clients could not

having

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have

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direct

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a direct

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touch or the right to try

first

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it first

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before they purchase it. In conclusion, the new inventions of

Technology

have helped shopping activities to be easier and more convenient, but sometimes there are some unavoidable limitations.