Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others believe it does not help shoppers much. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Today we recognize a dominant of
technology
with
omnipresence
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the omnipresence
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of intelligent devices in our life. With their help, some customers report that they have a better experience in shopping while others don't appreciate it. Personally, I incline to the
first
point of view whereas I still give the reasonable opinions of both sides.
To begin
with,
fruit
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the fruit
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of
technology
such
as online shopping definitely assists to simplify the shopping process while the customers have more beneficial services. Indeed, virtual markets present
wider
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a wider
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number of goods with various price
level
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levels
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, allowing
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the customer
a customer
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customer
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customers
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to compare the cost and the quality of
same
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the same
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kind of products, especially through the public feedback and range of the other buyers.
Besides
, with
virtual
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a virtual
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assistant
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assistants
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, they can find more quickly and exactly the issues suitable for their demands. Online shopping foundations not only broaden the options but
also
expand the geographical scale of purchasing when now
customer
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customers
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can add in their online bag products from other countries and waiting for the delivery
man
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manship
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ship
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to ship
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the packet right on the front door.
Moreover
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the modern technologies nowadays present the online wallet. It means the clients can pay through the mobile banking app by
enter
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entering
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a security password or scan the QR code.
Therefore
they don't have to keep the cash with them, avoiding
to
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the robber action.
However
, some people say that using
technology
on shopping does not help them it could
be understand
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understand
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apply
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it
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is
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why there are sometimes incidents happening with our device,
such
as
losing
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of internet or lag in processing purchasing activities.
Additionally
, there are some types of good are
also
hardly
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to buy online,
for
example
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clothes and foods. Clients could not
having
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direct
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a direct
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touch or the right to try
first
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it first
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before they purchase it. In conclusion, the new inventions of
Technology
have helped shopping activities to be easier and more convenient, but sometimes there are some unavoidable limitations.
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