You would like to apply for a full-time position at an international airport. Write to the human resource department and say. -What job you are interested in -Explain what you are currently doing -Why do you think you are best candidate for the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a full-time job at your international airport in the USA. At present, I am a recent graduate from Technology University in Tashkent and my major is a pilot mechanic. The other day,

while

I was having breakfast, I came across an advertisement requiring an assistant mechanic at your airport. Afterwards, I decided to try myself for

this

position and I hope I will be an asset to your company. Nowadays, I am engaged in repairing broken cars in my father's workshop and it feels a bit more awkward as I am specialized in a pilot mechanic.

Therefore

, I would to switch my current profession and gain enough experience in the airline system. As I mentioned above, I have got a two-year of experience in my father's garage and since I graduated from Technology University, I have been excellent at fixing engines and other parts of an aeroplane, so I feel that I am one of the most suitable candidates. I am really excited about working in a reputable airport like yours and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Jim Kerry

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The letter overall addresses the main points, but more could be done to enhance the specificity and relevance to the job applied for. Provide more detailed reasoning as to why your skills are a perfect match for the role you desire.

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Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices and paragraphing to ensure each point is clearly made and the response flows naturally from introduction to conclusion.

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8 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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