Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, most
people
love to watch
movies
and play
video
games
especially the ones that contain violent actions.
However
, there is an argument whether
movies
and
video
games
that contain violent
action
should be banned in society or these activities just harmless and help
people
to relax. On one hand, those who support the view that
video
games
and
movies
that contain violent
action
are just harmless and help them to relax have their own valid reason.
Firstly
, some of these
people
do not know how to express their stress to other
people
by talking about their problems, so they try to release the tensions that they face by playing
video
games
.
For example
, students playing
video
games
after
finish
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finishing
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their exams and working
people watching
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action
movies
after stressing out at work.
Furthermore
, playing
video
games
and watching
movies
that contain violent
action
may be a hobby for some
people
especially boys. Boys have their own nature that most of them love to play extreme
video
games
like PUBG that contain a lot of violent
action
.
On the other hand
, those who feel that
video
games
and
movies
that contain violent
action
have their own valid reason. Since both
kids
and teenagers are the ones who
tends
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to follow the things around them,
people
especially moms afraid that their
kids
may influence by the
action
in
video
games
that they play and
movies
that they watch.
For example
, some of these
kids
want to try activities that they see in
games
or
movies
towards
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their friends at school.
As a result
, they will get into unexpected injuries
such
as
a
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broken
arms
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.
Moreover
,
people
who watch
movies
and play
video
games
that contain violence tend to make vandalism to public property.
For instance
, painting an inappropriate word or pictures at the playgrounds that are not suitable for
kids
to see it. In conclusion, I agree that
movies
and
games
which contain violence should be banned by the governments. Governments need to play their role to make sure a country is a safe place for all
people
.
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