Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most
people
love to watch movies
and play video
games
especially the ones that contain violent actions. However
, there is an argument whether movies
and video
games
that contain violent action
should be banned in society or these activities just harmless and help people
to relax.
On one hand, those who support the view that video
games
and movies
that contain violent action
are just harmless and help them to relax have their own valid reason. Firstly
, some of these people
do not know how to express their stress to other people
by talking about their problems, so they try to release the tensions that they face by playing video
games
. For example
, students playing video
games
after finish
their exams and working Change the verb form
finishing
people watching
Add a hyphen
people-watching
action
movies
after stressing out at work. Furthermore
, playing video
games
and watching movies
that contain violent action
may be a hobby for some people
especially boys. Boys have their own nature that most of them love to play extreme video
games
like PUBG that contain a lot of violent action
.
On the other hand
, those who feel that video
games
and movies
that contain violent action
have their own valid reason. Since both kids
and teenagers are the ones who tends
to follow the things around them, Change the verb form
tend
people
especially moms afraid that their kids
may influence by the action
in video
games
that they play and movies
that they watch. For example
, some of these kids
want to try activities that they see in games
or movies
towards
their friends at school. Change preposition
with
As a result
, they will get into unexpected injuries such
as a
broken Correct article usage
apply
arms
. Correct the article-noun agreement
arm
Moreover
, people
who watch movies
and play video
games
that contain violence tend to make vandalism to public property. For instance
, painting an inappropriate word or pictures at the playgrounds that are not suitable for kids
to see it.
In conclusion, I agree that movies
and games
which contain violence should be banned by the governments. Governments need to play their role to make sure a country is a safe place for all people
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