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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

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It is obviously clear that relatives are becoming unfamiliar to
people
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 who are staying in one house during these days like they were familiar before. In
this
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 essay, I will analyse the reason behind
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 trend and suggest possible ways to make families inseparable.
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 with, the main reason why housemates are not close is having less
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 to spend with family and spending
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 on the internet.
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,
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 have to
work
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 to support back their relation which leads to most of their
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 spent on
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.
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, after finishing the task, most
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 spend their
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 accessing social networks until they go to bed.
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,
people
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 who must
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 overtime or till midnight even couldn’t have dinner with their families and for others even they use their phones to access the network when they are at the dining table without talking to each other.
As a result
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, a household is becoming more and more unfamiliar than before.
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, there is a possible solution to bring households to intimate back by giving them enough
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 for families.
In other words
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, it is a good way by making
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 to dine with family and showing care to each other.
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, expanding the
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 with children to go to the playground, the cinema or doing activities on weekend can make folk to intimate.
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, a family circle can retain not to separate. To conclude, despite spending too much
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 on
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 and using the internet can be alien for relatives, the problem can be solved by using up the
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 together with family.
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