Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?
It is obviously clear that relatives are becoming unfamiliar to
people
who are staying in one house during these days like they were familiar before. In this
essay, I will analyse the reason behind this
trend and suggest possible ways to make families inseparable.
To begin
with, the main reason why housemates are not close is having less time
to spend with family and spending time
on the internet. Firstly
, people
have to work
to support back their relation which leads to most of their time
spent on work
. Secondly
, after finishing the task, most people
spend their time
accessing social networks until they go to bed. For example
, people
who must work
overtime or till midnight even couldn’t have dinner with their families and for others even they use their phones to access the network when they are at the dining table without talking to each other. As a result
, a household is becoming more and more unfamiliar than before.
However
, there is a possible solution to bring households to intimate back by giving them enough time
for families. In other words
, it is a good way by making time
to dine with family and showing care to each other. For instance
, expanding the time
with children to go to the playground, the cinema or doing activities on weekend can make folk to intimate. Thus
, a family circle can retain not to separate.
To conclude, despite spending too much time
on work
and using the internet can be alien for relatives, the problem can be solved by using up the time
together with family.Submitted by sandarmyint740 on
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