Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

It is the fact that, gaining
weight
in
kids
have
a
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several reasons along with, it is the busting problem around the nations.
This
essay will explore some of the possible reasons which might have
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cause
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this
situation and highlight a few drawbacks of obesity.
The childhood
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obesity has several impacts too, the
first
and the for the most is having outside
food
especially deep-fried dishes becoming more popular all over the world because it is extremely delicious and yummy as well as
budget friendly
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.
In addition
, not only
kids
spend most of the time
on
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playing video games and avoiding outdoors
sports
but
also
, they get pocket money to spend which would cause
weight
gaining issues at
earlier
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stage.
Furthermore
,
kids
love to having or exploring new
food
, new dishes
such
as chines, fast
food
like
burger
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burgers
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, pizza you name it.
Hence
, it causes detrimental effects on health
such
as increasing
level
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levels
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of sugar,
gain
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excessive
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an excessive
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amount
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amounts
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of
weight
.
However
, to embark with the key reasons to support my ideology is that,
firstly
, avoid a sedentary lifestyle, step outside play some ground
sports
which is mainly important for
kids
.
Moreover
, parents must have
look
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into it and force
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a child
the child
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child
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children
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to play apart from video games enrol them in some
sports
club where they able to exercise and indulge in
sports
.
Also
, parents must not provide pocket money or if it is really needed for travelling purpose
then
give them limited cash,
thus
they will not eat street
food
much. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that,
although
the
weight
gaining cause because of fast-
food
, along with sedentary life it has several ways to cope up
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