Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sport
is an unavoidable part of human's
life
since
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ages. Many
people
believe that
sport
is inevitable for
life
while others believe
that is
just a time pass activity. I believe that it is important.
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essay is set to discuss both the views along with my opinion in
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paragraphs.
First
of all,
sport
is a great form of physical exercise. In most
of
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the
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sport
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people
need to participate actively which involves walking, running, jogging etc, that help
people
to keep active.
Moreover
,
sport
helps to develop good virtues like sportsman spirit,
team work
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. If the person is actively participating in games like cricket he will learn to work in
team
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which helps later in
life
.
For example
, according to a survey of BBB Health Department, Sweden,
people
who used to participate in
sport
regularly tend to become more ill by 25% than
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do not participate in
sport
.
Hence
, it is proven that
sport
is a good exercise that
keep
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people
healthy.
However
, on the other side, some
people
spend
ample
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amount of time in
sport
leaving their primary duties. Some
people
have
addiction
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an addiction
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of
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sport
that they
spen
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spend
spent
most of
time
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the time
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in a day
for
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sports
scrificing
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sacrificing
their
study
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studies
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or job. Many students leave their classes to enjoy
sport
,
hence
, they do not get enough marks in
study
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a study
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which affects their carrier.
Sport
should be taken as a fun activity.
People
can feel fresh after that. To conclude,
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essay discussed
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both
the
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views. It can be concluded that
sport
should not be taken seriously.
People
should try to balance between
sport
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activity and other important duties of
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Chronic diseases
  • Teamwork
  • Cultural divides
  • Revenue generator
  • Infrastructure
  • Patriotism
  • Role models
  • Commercialization
  • Recreation
  • Stress-relief
  • Elite sports
  • Injury risks
  • Doping scandals
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