The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts data
of
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admissions of
the
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international and native scholars of Australia in
Australian
universities
over a decade
that is
from 2001 to 2010.
Firstly
, it can be seen that in 2001 local
pupils
who commenced their studies in
Australian
universities
were almost ten times the overseas
pupils
that are to say 20, 000 overseas and 2, 00, 000
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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from Australia. But in ten years the interest in international graduates to study abroad increased and the count of overseas
pupils
reached 80000 with
the
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steady growth with every passing year.
While
no
such
change has been noticed in terms of the local scholars as even after ten years, candidates who initiated studies in local
universities
are almost the same as in 2001.
Secondly
, in relation to the total
number
of
students
in
Australian
universities
, the data shown is somewhat distinct as in these a drastic change happened regarding both kinds of
students
. The
number
of total foreign
students
hiked 4 times in 2010(80, 000) as compared to 2001 (20, 000).
Similarly
, if we talk about local
students
the trend shows a gradual increase in the total
number
of
pupils
from 2001 to 2006 but after 2006 there is no increase in the
number
of native
students
.
To conclude
, it is observed that the figure of local
students
is much more than overseas
students
and over the decade no change has been seen in
this
trend
on the contrary
with the passage of time interest in international
students
is inclining toward
Australian
universities
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, universities, pupils, number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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