Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One fact that I believe to be pivotal is that with the advancement of technology, entertainment has changed. While some people believe that it is a new trend in society, others oppose it. Both views will be examined in
this
essay;
however
, I
also
think it does not influence the community and outweigh its existence. The primary reason for banning
such
movies and computer games which contain violence is that it has the power to change community behaviour at a vast level and make them aggressive. It is the fact that continuous exposure to anything can make us addicted to it.
Such
visual contents perhaps changed the psychology of the person, compared to the normal one.
Moreover
, audiences are influenced by their favourite actors and try to attempt those events later.
Nevertheless
, other people believe that it is harmful entertainment and should be continued as it is a stress burn and entertains the society.
For example
, PUBG was the most popular game among youngsters, but later the government banned it for creating unnecessary violence;
however
, it was influenced by adults a lot. They think they have a better understanding of the content, its effect and its impact on those in real life. After analysis of both the points, In my opinion, today’s generation can differentiate between real and reel; violence in movies and games has less impact on people.
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