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Many students now refusing to choose science subjects at their university level. Why do you think this is happening and what is the impact on the community?

#students #science #subjects #university #level #impact #community
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Nowadays,
science
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subjects
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such
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 as math and physics are not popular
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 university
students
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 as much as
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 and
students
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 do not choose them.
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 essay will outline some possible reasons for
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 as well as the social issues it may lead to. One of the
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 behind
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 issue could be related to salary. Unfortunately,
subjects
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such
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 as math or physics would not lead to a lucrative career which is one of the most important criteria for
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a new
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 generation.
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, they tend to choose
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 like
business
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instead
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 of
science
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.
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, these
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 are very demanding. They need
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a considerable amount of time and energy for studying, while university
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 prefer
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easier
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 in order to spend as much time on study as they allocate to leisure activities. In consequence, a
community
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 which
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 the lack of scientist and professionals could not produce their needs.
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, they will not be able to produce drugs if they do not know about chemistry.
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, the
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 have to imports many goods, which costs them huge money (a fortune?).
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, the development of a
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 depends on their scientist.
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 to say, if
students
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 do not continue to study
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 they could not develop technology or industry in their counties, which leads to
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an undeveloped
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community
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. In conclusion, I think
students
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 refuse
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science
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 because they do not lead to high-paid careers and need years of study.
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,
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 has detrimental effects on society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • Lack of passion
  • Career prospects
  • Lucrative
  • Prestigious
  • Rote learning
  • Critical thinking
  • Shortage of qualified professionals
  • Sector
  • Scientific advancements
  • Economic growth
  • Job creation
  • Foster
  • Enthusiasm
  • Engaging
  • Relevant
  • Initiatives
  • Societal values
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