Many students now refusing to choose science subjects at their university level. Why do you think this is happening and what is the impact on the community?

Nowadays,
science
subjects
such
as math and physics are not popular
between
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university
students
as much as
past
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and
students
do not choose them.
This
essay will outline some possible reasons for
this
as well as the social issues it may lead to. One of the
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behind
this
issue could be related to salary. Unfortunately,
subjects
such
as math or physics would not lead to a lucrative career which is one of the most important criteria for
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generation.
Therefore
, they tend to choose
subjects
like
business
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instead
of
science
.
Moreover
, these
subjects
are very demanding. They need
to
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a considerable amount of time and energy for studying, while university
students
prefer
to
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easier
subjects
in order to spend as much time on study as they allocate to leisure activities. In consequence, a
community
which
is face
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the lack of scientist and professionals could not produce their needs.
For example
, they will not be able to produce drugs if they do not know about chemistry.
As a result
, the
community
have to imports many goods, which costs them huge money (a fortune?).
Furthermore
, the development of a
community
depends on their scientist.
That is
to say, if
students
do not continue to study
science
they could not develop technology or industry in their counties, which leads to
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community
. In conclusion, I think
students
refuse
studying
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science
because they do not lead to high-paid careers and need years of study.
However
,
this
has detrimental effects on society.
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