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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they release from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

#criminals #crimes #release #prison
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 that societies are facing is that the majority of
offenders
 are eager to get involved in criminal activities after their releasing from
prisons
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. From my perspective, In order to
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such
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 system can play a pivotal role by providing rehabilitation programs in jails since
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most of these
criminals
 are not educated enough to have a chance to turn over a new leaf after spending their time in
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quality
. In my opinion, the predominant element that forces
offenders
 to break the law is that they are
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 enough to start a new business or find a decent job. One
posssible
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 explanation is that
such
 people are mostly from low-income families so that they were not given an environment that was conducive to learning or nurturing.
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 problems is another cause to adopt
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. Indeed, when
criminals
 are serving their
sentance
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 in
prisons
, they are under
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 mental pressure because they are not capable of supporting their loved ones or feel that they been treated unfairly by the authorities,
Therefore
, they are out of
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custody
 are looking for the easiest way to
fullfill
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fulfil
 their needs. Considering what has been mentioned, I take the view that the onus is on the powers that be to set worthwhile programs to
rehabilite
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rehabilitate
offenders
 during their sentence.
This
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criminals
 are not armed with
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skill to make a living so they are exposed to break the law again when they release back to society. To be exact, the authorities are able to invite technical institutions to hold practical classes,
such
 as repairing electronic devices or carpentry, in
prisons
.
In addition
, officials can have psychologists talk with prisoners to assist them to have a stable mind since a large number of
offenders
 suffer from mental disorders.
Thus
, by paying more heed to
criminals
 in jails, the authorities can make exemplary
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differences
 to dwindle the number of
offenders
 who commit
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 after their release. In conclusion, I subscribe
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 view that in the terms of
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 crime among ex-
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criminals
, we can
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noticeable
 changes if
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 system
step
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 in hold rehabilitation programs for
offenders
 when they are kept in
prisons
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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