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There are more new towns being built nowadays it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for individual to spend their free time to .what extent do you agree or disagree ...

#towns #parks #sports #facilities #centres #time
It is true that
town
 architecture should focus the infrastructure while dividing areas
for
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 different public and private sectors.some people reckon that public
parks
 and gyms are crucial in
town
 ,whereas I can understand their concerns but in my opinion shopping malls are equally important as other facilities. On the one hand ,
parks
 can provide enough space to city dwellers in order to do yoga or play games
such
 as basketball , badminton and table tennis , which may help them to stay fit and healthier . In
this
 techno-savvy
era
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 people are having hectic
schedule
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schedules
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 due to their heavy
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workload
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work load
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workload
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 and running in
rat
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a rat
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 race
consequently
 ,facing
health related
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 issues
such
 as depression and obesity .
Moreover
 ,
parks
 will provide engagement of people with other individuals and
this
 can be a great vaccine for problems like depression, anxiety.
On the other hand
 , shopping centres in a
town
 can be more convenient for residents of
town
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 as these will open opportunities
of
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 employment because
mall
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the mall
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 is a big shop containing several different kinds of shops suchlike shoes , fast food and cloths .
Furthermore
 ,
this
 will reduce
traveling
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travelling
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because nowadays everyone wants to live a lavish and branded life and In order to get these brands they travel far away from their
town
consequently
 , more pollution increases So considering the factors of
importance
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the importance
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 of mall, there is no doubt in saying that mall should be given as much importance as given to
parks
.
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