IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In
past
Correct article usage
the past
show examples
 time was really common
write
Fix the infinitive
to write
show examples
letter
Fix the agreement mistake
letters
show examples
 to each other, but the evolution of technology has vastly facilitated conversation between people and letters are becoming obsolete . Mobile phones, Facebook, WhatsApp, e-mail,
Instragram
Correct your spelling
Instagram
are sources
Change the verb form
are sourced
are sourcing
show examples
 currently used to communicate. At present, the internet is helping people maintain connections fast anywhere and I concur that in the future
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
written
 communication will be unnecessary. Modern communications means are more convenient rather than used before
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 because
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
 help us to convey our message in a few seconds. Modern sources
such
Linking Words
 as mobile phone
reduces
Change the verb form
reduce
show examples
 the distance level between one country to others.
For instance
Linking Words
, I am from Brazil and I am living in Australia. Even I am really far from my family and friends, I may talk to my parents by video call or message in real-time and that way I can feel closer to them. If I had to use writing communication it would take a long time.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, there are special occasions that letters are still used,
for example
Linking Words
 when you invite someone to weddings, usually the people send an
invite
Change the verb form
inviting
show examples
 sign, but I do not believe that will be followed for a long time. As traditional as
this
Linking Words
 still happens, in a few years owing to the development of technology it will become extinct. In conclusion, in accordance with the examples cited above, technology is improving day by day and modern communication are making our life uncomplicated.
Thus
Linking Words
, I agree that write letters will decrease more and more until it becomes unnecessary.
Submitted by carvalhos.comercial on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: