Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays advertising is popular in every country and everywhere. Many people believe that advertising makes them

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purchase things that are not essential.

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the same

time

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others think that advertising can change our life

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better

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essay will discuss what point is better and gives daily examples. Some folks indeed think that advertising is a waste of time and money.

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is that when we see

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a thing we want to purchase because they deliver their product carefully.

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, many girls see clothes , that are put on models and look great, but when they buy a dress it is not like in advertising. In my opinion

advertising

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these days are too much and they should invest money in something better,

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charity. On another hand, few of them consider that advertising is a good way of delivering something new ,trending- that can improve people’s

lives

.

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, some appliances ,that are crucial for our homes, we can see in advertising and that particular thing can

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our

lives

easier. I believe that not all of the advertisements are useless and some of them we -people really need them. There are many persons who think that advertisements make us

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buy unnecessary goods like clothes, shoes, but on another

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there are some who consider that advertising can improve our

lives

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essay argued why advertising sometimes is good and can improve our

lives

and when it is useless and we waste money and our time watching it.