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Nowadays youth is less polite ND respectful as compared to past time what is the reason ND solutions

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Nowadays youngsters are more
voilent
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violent
 and disrespectful as compared to the older generation. I completely agree with the above statement and will discuss my views in the following paragraphs.
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 , one of the foremost
reason
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 for youngsters nowadays not respecting their elders is living in nuclear families. In
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single-family
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single
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a single
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 family, both mother and father are busy with their schedule and they get less time to spend with their
children
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, which eventually leads to
under grooming
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 of their
offsprings
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.
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children
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 living alone without grandparents are not exposed to
such
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 an environment in which they learn basic
etiquettes
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 on how to deal with others.
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, small families with only one child policy
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 one of the striking reasons for masses turning adamant and of ill behaviour as parents
fulfills
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 every wish of their
children
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 and they are turning violent due to
this
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 privilege.
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, there can be many solutions to mitigate
this
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 problem in
younger
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the younger
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 generation.
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, making
children
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 grow in
social
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the social
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 environment makes them an extrovert and learn basic behaving skills. And
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, living in joint families can be helpful in making
children
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 more polite and respectful In summary , growing folks if
given
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the given
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 environment they can grow into better individuals
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