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Many working people do little or no physical exercise during the working days or in their leisure time and have health problem as a result? What can be done how to fix it?

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Nowdays
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, working
people
 devote less and less
time
 to do physical activities, resulting they develop health issues
such
 as obesity and heart problems.
This
 is due to long extended working hours and employees get hardly any
time
 for
themeselves
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themselves
. Addictions to
televsion
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television
 programmes and video games discouraged them to perform physical activities during their leisure
time
. On the one hand, everybody is busy
these day
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.
People
 are working so hard to meet their personal and professional
committments
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commitments
 so they get hardly any
time
 to relax or exercise. A recent survey conducted by the WHO revealed that
twent
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twenty
 five
percent
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per cent
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 of heart problems patients have
perform
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 no physical activity due to their sedentary lifestyle.Apart from
this
,
a
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country having five days work in
week
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a week
the week
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,
people
 rarely train on weekends. They prefer to be
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in
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bed
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the bed
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 or playing video games which ultimately
deterimental
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detrimental
 effect on their health.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
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 should
lauch
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launch
campaign
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a campaign
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 to encourage
people
 to
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work out
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workout
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work out
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 at least a couple of times
in
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apply
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a week. Government not only penalize the employers who take work from employee more than eight hours but
also
 they should be encouraged to open gym within the office
permises
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premises
.
Moreover
,
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the employee
an employee
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employee
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employees
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 can do some
excercise
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exercise
exercises
 during their breaks. An article published in The Tribune stated that simple
strtching
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stretching
 can help to rid of lethargy and increased productivity. In
conlusion
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conclusion
, busy lifestyle is the main reason why
people
 are unable to exercise normally. The solution to
this
 problem is to establish an eight-hour workday and encourage physical activity during leisure
time
 are the solutions to
this
 problem.
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