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Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

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Nowadays studying outside the native place is popular for tertiary education. There are many advantages like
students
 become pro-active and responsible . I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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set to discuss both it along with
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 conclusion.
First
 of all, studying outside the place where you brought up is a big step.
Such
students
 become more responsible. When
students
are buy
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 their own they are in control of everything like from managing study to
fianance
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finance
.
This
 will give a sense of responsibility. To cope up with the fees for
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 they need to do jobs,
hence
,they can understand
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 of money.
Moreover
, house core activities like cooking,cleaning
also
 need to
done
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 by
students
. According to a survey of Gujarat Education board,
students
 who use to study away from home are 30% more responsible in their life compare to who studied at home.
Therefore
,
students
 become more aware
about
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 their own work. Another major
benifit
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benefit
 is,it broadens the mental horizon of the
indivual
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individual
. If
students
 are living in a new city or country, they will try to understand other's
culture
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 and traditions. They will
also
 respect it.
For instance
,the
students
 who are studying in Canada can communicate easily with other natives as
students
 will try to open up with other people.
However
,on the
hand
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 there are some downsides like
students
 may not study regularly,could bunk their classes. They can be addicted to adult
contents
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 like porn,alcohol because of loneliness. To conclude, studying away from has many upsides and downsides but the advantages are far more than disadvantages.
Hence
, I believe that
students
 should
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 for it.
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