For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays, people’s values have changed and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than art. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
As time goes by, it is considered that the general stressed
values
should be practical such
as science rather than arts
by some people
. Though it is understandable their point of view in some ways, aesthetic values
still should not be neglected considering crucial factors to human beings.
Firstly
, as I see it, the reason why there are negative opinions about arts
is that some people
think of arts
as time-consuming and not productive ,unlike other values
. To be more specific, they see the only value of arts
is just showing some sophisticated visual pictures or statues to the public and they think that is
all. In addition
, they reckon artworks are for some limited range of people
, not everyone,
since some Remove the comma
apply
people
do not enjoy appreciating the art while there are tons of population who love using the newly developed technologies such
as useful smartphone apps. Aside from that, they might think arts
can affect us little though other realistic factors do.
On the other hand
, their perception toward arts
could be improved once they get to know better about the reasonable reasons of the precious values
of arts
. To be more specific, if they are educated about why arts
are essential in lives in school and other materials such
as TV, newspaper and books, it would be easier to make the agreement about the arts
. Plus, it is also
important that they should be informed that the very foundation of every science and technology is art. Not to mention artworks can bring us the sense of mentally delighted feelings, we should know that by being motivated by some specific artistry, a lot of practical and realistic skills have been made. For example
, there are several crucial scientific facts were discovered because some scientists were inspired by magnificent artworks and they had the guts to give it a try even though they looked absurd and not possible. If these kinds of direct relations between aesthetical worth and practical values
could be highlighted to the public, they would be attracted to arts
and there would be more attention to non-practical worth in the end.
To sum up, considering the current reality and lack of interest in art these days, it is high time to educate the public and mentioned the correlation between the arts
and practical skills so that everyone could recognise the importance of arts
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