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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such choice?

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Masses preferring
pre cooked
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 items
instead
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 of
home cooked
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meals
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 is trending nowadays due to many reasons.
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 culture has its own merits and demerits which I will discuss in my following paragraphs. To embark on,
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 and
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foremost reason behind masses eating at hotels and restaurants is overburdened schedule at work. Most
of
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employees
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the employees
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 of any companies or offices eat their
meals
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 from outside only as they don't have enough time to make
food
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 for themselves.
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, nowadays
market
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 is flooded with ample
food
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 chains offering local as well as
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an exotic
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 menu
in
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 reasonable prices.
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, Mac Donald's and dominos is a
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 outlet offering subsidized offers on weekends to lure customers.
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 trend has merits
such
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 as
,
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it becomes easier for
working
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 populace to carry
ready made
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food
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 with them due to tight schedule .
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, it boosts
economy
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 of that place as many cities offer traditional cuisine for travellers.
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, folks are losing
feeling
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 of love n nurture which comes from
home cooked
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meals
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.
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, the hygienic conditions in which these
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 and
pre mix
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 packets are prepared are very derogatory.
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, many
food
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 chains were inspected by
food
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inspector
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 and most of them failed in
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the test
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test
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 as they did not meet
pre requisite
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 for a healthy kitchen .
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,
ready made
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food
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 is always compromised in its nutritional value due to unhealthy and unwanted additives. In summary, eating outside can be fine but not on regular basis as the nutritional value which
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home-cooked
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home
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 cooked
food
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 provides is irreplaceable.
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