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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch television . What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is an undeniable fact that the reading for pleasure trend is increasing day by day. People
also
 watch the
tv
 and social media in their free time . In fact, I strongly believe that
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readers have good imagination
power
 than those who watch
tv
 and social media. The
first
 and foremost reason to support my ideology is that, reading book help in gaining concentration and
also
 boost the memory
power
 .
Furthermore
, watching
tv
 a longer period of time leads to many eye problems like red eyes and vision problems.
In addition
, readers can learn reading skills as well as
pronounciation
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pronunciation
skill
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also
 . The word bank will
also
 increase in
this
 trend .
Moreover
, when a person is reading
then
 it has sufficient time to imagine the condition . Another most ideal reason is that books are handy and light in weight so a person can carry them anywhere.
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 side, in
this
 era of
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 world, e-book
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also
 helpful for those who
travelling
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 a lot . As per the USA
research
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 there are 60% more chances of absorbing or understand the things which we see on the
tv
 . The children have more
power
 to capture the information , they saw.
In addition
, many latest story and books are not available on offline market , so the
voratious
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voracious
 reader
prefer
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 online reading from the gadgets.
For example
, an Amazon-e-reader provides all the facilities required reader. To conclude, not only physical books help in develop creativity but online portal
also
 help in
the
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gaining imagination
power
 . I believe that watching television has far more negative impacts but e-books are much advantageous.
Submitted by Harsh prajapati  on

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