People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In today's world, most
people
are aware to protect the environment but it all stumbles when it comes to put
things Change the verb form
putting
in
Change preposition
into
practise
. In Replace the word
practice
this
essay, I will detail what needs to be done to have overwhelming participation in saving the environment.
In today's fast-moving world, human beings have become more attached to technologies rather than going with nature which is the main reason for polluting the surroundings. Even though,
many Remove the comma
apply
government
are bringing strict norms but it all depends on the individual's responsibility. Change to a plural noun
governments
For example
, government
had made numerous measures to curb the usage of plastics but Add an article
the government
people
for convinience
still using plastic bags which harms nature to a greater extent. Correct your spelling
convenience
This
is because,
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apply
people
do not see the effect of spoiling nature immediately.
In addition
to that, government
should step in and frame stringent laws by imposing hefty fines, jail sentences for those who pollute the environment. Add an article
the government
For example
, public littering is more common in developing countries, because there are no strict laws to punish people
committing those mistakes. Also
, there are few things which government
should take control and
leade those. Change preposition
of and
For example
, planting more trees, protecting wild-life
, replacing carbon-emitting fuels with biogas and make stricter laws to make Correct your spelling
wildlife
people
follow it. Also
, government
needs to do create more awareness creating programs to make Add an article
the government
people
aware of what they are doing and the effects of their actions.
To conclude, it is a collective effort of government
and every individual in the world to make the planet safe for our next
generation for healthy living.Submitted by gikarthikeyan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite