These days many of us prefer to throw damaged thing away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change in attitude?
Over the years,
usage
of Correct article usage
the usage
things
have
been Change the verb form
has
change
. A decade ago, Change the verb form
changing
changed
people
prefer to repair broken things
but nowadays they prefer to buy new things
instead
of fixing broken parts. This
essay will discuss why people
prefer to
new Change preposition
apply
things
over repairing and what effects on the environment.
To begin
with, a decade ago things
were not easily available and that time
was not a time
of technology. These days people
can buy things
anything from anywhere at any time
. It is easily available. In the previous time
they fixed their old items and used Add a comma
,time
then
. Correct your spelling
them
Moreover
, another reason for replacing old items with new is
Correct pronoun usage
ones is
cost
of Add an article
the cost
repairing
. Correct pronoun usage
themrepairing
For instance
, Apple's new phone is 1.5 lac and if there is a glitch in phone
Correct article usage
the phone
then
its repairing cost is 1 lac then
people
prefer to buy new items.
However
, wastage of electronic products are
increasing day by day which is really harmful Change the verb form
is
for
the environment. Change the preposition
to
For instance
, a survey conducted in
Oxford University London by Change preposition
at
the
Richard Thompson in which found that electronic waste Correct article usage
apply
such
as mobile phones and laptops is increasing which cannot be recycled. The government should organise some seminars to aware
community about wastage and effects on Add an article
the aware
environment
To conclude, Add an article
the environment
people
prefer to replace their products with new
one due to repairing Add an article
a new
cost
and Fix the agreement mistake
costs
easy
availability of products.Correct article usage
the easy
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