These days many of us prefer to throw damaged thing away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change in attitude?

Over the years,
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of
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have
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been
change
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changed
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. A decade ago,
people
prefer to repair broken
things
but nowadays they prefer to buy new
things
instead
of fixing broken parts.
This
essay will discuss why
people
prefer
to
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new
things
over repairing and what effects on the environment.
To begin
with, a decade ago
things
were not easily available and that
time
was not a
time
of technology. These days
people
can buy
things
anything from anywhere at any
time
. It is easily available. In the previous
time
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they fixed their old items and used
then
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them
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.
Moreover
, another reason for replacing old items with new
is
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ones is
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cost
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the cost
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of
repairing
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themrepairing
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.
For instance
, Apple's new phone is 1.5 lac and if there is a glitch in
phone
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the phone
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then
its repairing cost is 1 lac
then
people
prefer to buy new items.
However
, wastage of electronic products
are
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is
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increasing day by day which is really harmful
for
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the environment.
For instance
, a survey conducted
in
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Oxford University London by
the
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Richard Thompson in which found that electronic waste
such
as mobile phones and laptops is increasing which cannot be recycled. The government should organise some seminars to
aware
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community about wastage and effects on
environment
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the environment
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To conclude,
people
prefer to replace their products with
new
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a new
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one due to repairing
cost
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costs
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and
easy
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the easy
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availability of products.
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