Task 2: Competition for getting into university is becoming increasingly fierce. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years,

education

in the countries is a topic that has been recognized and invested, so the number of

universities

or colleges has increased slightly.

Next

,

pupils

also

compete to go to top

universities

. Not only

this

issue leads to

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in the student entrance exam but

also

cause

competition

among

universities

There are 2 reasons to compete among

universities

.

Firstly

, the development of

education

in the countries is more and more upgraded, which all

people

have a good awareness of with

education

.

People

believe that

education

is the fastest road to success.

Besides

, companies require employees looking for a job to have a high degree in college to help the company develop, so

pupils

choose and submit an application in the

universities

, which ensure

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of teaching and easy search for work.

This

issue causes a lot of

competition

among

universities

. Almost all

universities

that have a job application rate usually have a high entrance exam score.

This

isn't an easy number.

Therefore

, students must

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, invest a lot of learning and cultivate their own knowledge to be passed in

universities

.

Secondly

, each student’s needs are different, so they can find a university that suits their abilities and tuition fees.

For example

,

universities

on top have more cheap tuition than normal

universities

or

pupils

compete for scholarships in colleges, which have 100

people

but only choose 1 person. These are the 2 main reasons that lead to

competition

among

universities

. In my view, the

competition

of

pupils

when joining in university exams is good.

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reason,

this

issue developed the concentrate on learning as well as most

people

appreciate

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education

and their thinking ability more develop. It leads to society developing more and more positively.

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reason,

universities

will have

higher

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rate of excellent students and

pupils

have a job after graduating, they easily become

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prestigious

school

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that

have

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quality

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the quality

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of

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teaching

good

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. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the increase in

competition

to get enrolled in a university has more positive impacts on students, like the increase in willingness to work harder and stay focused to achieve their goal, than any negative impacts.