Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Global Warming has led to climatic changes across the globe. To conserve the environment from these greenhouse gases, Governments across the planet, collectively are enforcing new policies to reduce pollution. While some
people
believe that the new
reforms
introduced by these authorities
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harming a
lot
of business, others claim that
this
may bring
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best opportunity for innovation. I strongly agree with the
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people
as
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believe these
reforms
will help
people
find alternatives and create new ideas while keeping the welfare of the environment in mind.
Firstly
, the policies induced by the government are to benefit
the
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nature. Industries that consume a
lot
of fossil fuel for
producting
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producing
goods emit a
lot
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pollutants in the environment. Restricting
such
companies by imposing heavy taxes can encourage businesses to find alternate eco-friendly methods for production. These measures will definitely reduce the profit margins of these manufacturers but ultimately bring about more benefits in the future.
For Example
, numerous clothing brands in Sweden started producing eco-friendly clothes after the government
impleted
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implemented
completed
various
reforms
on these companies which caused a
lot
of pollution.
Furthermore
, These
reforms
have led to plenty of new business opportunities
to
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new companies. High Fuel
prices
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and
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scarcity
scarsity
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of resources motivated the idea of inventing electric cars.
For instance
, Countries
Australia
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introduced additional taxes on
people
owning more than a car per family.
This
undeniably reduced the traffic congestions on the roads
moreover
, reduced the pollution rate of the country.
On the other hand
, it encouraged
the
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people
to opt for
electric powered
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cars. In conclusion, Though these
reforms
can affect the stability
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many
business
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for
a
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short term, they will definitely bring benefits overall in the future.
Hence
, in my opinion, we need to focus on long term benefits and goals which can be achieved with these
reforms
.
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