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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. Do you agree or disagree?

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Do
school
 teachers impact a
child
 more than their
parents
?
This
 is the most debatable issue as some folks are of opinion that primary
school
 educationists influence
children
 to a greater extent than their progenitor.I completely agree with
this
 notion and the same shall be discussed
further
 in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, there is no doubt that a
child
 learns a lot from
parents
 since
,
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 it is a blood relation and some of the personality traits are passed on to offspring.
However
, after enrolling
children
 into elementary schools teachers influence will be predominant .A
child
 will be attracted to their guides in educational institutes because they get an entirely different environment ,unlike at
home
.
Moreover
, a teacher patiently teaches and try to get down to the level of a student .
Additionally
, a toddler spends most of his
time
 in
school
 with their tutors
hence
, it is natural that
children
 become inspired by their tutors.
For instance
, most primary academy students pretend and play the role of their teacher at
home
 with their siblings.
Therefore
 it will be evident from their actions like the way they behave, talk or walk that they are inspired by their educator.
On the other hand
, Nowaday's to combat the fast pace of the modern world and to make ends meet,both mother and father are working .
Thus
 once they are back
home
 they are tired and hardly spend
time
 with their
children
.
Furthermore
,even toddlers are exhausted and
thus
, do not talk much to their caretakers. In conclusion, I reiterate that once the
child
 goes to elementary institute, teachers have more influence in their life than
parents
 since they spend a lot of
time
 at
school
 with them and once they are
home
 both
parents
 and
children
 are tired and hardly have enough
time
 together.
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