In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays,
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more independent and prefer to have
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space than that in the past. Some
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of
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society
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that it is
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impact
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people
to get together and
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with family members, while I am not supporting
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the following reasons. It is true that human being is actually a social animal, to interwind with
others
as the nature of us. Whereas, to live alone or in a simple family structure does not mean that
people
reject to interact with
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others
. In fact, live alone can enhance our ability to adapt
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life and reduce
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reliance on
others
, improving
people
‘s life skills in many aspects and
also
helping
people
become more mature than that they are spoiled by elderly family members.
Besides
, individuals who have private space may reduce the interruption from the
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gap or some misunderstanding by their old
generation
, improving their efficiency and concentration on work or studies.
On the other hand
, some argue that live apart or far away from their relatives will harm
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their relationship.
This
kind of lifestyle will curb their connection with their old
generation
to the youth. They think grandparents
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paly
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an important role in their development, sharing
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their
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experiences or love may help their
next
generation
to shape their personality and
also
avoid they influenced by the negative things from
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society.
That is
to say, the teenagers with the carefulness attention by their relatives would notice and give
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immediately when they encounter bullying or some troubles when their parents are occupied with work. In conclusion, I do not agree that the relationship would be influenced by the long distances, especially in today’s
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with the tons of ways to connect with
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others
. And live in a small group or alone does not means that
people
will not willing to connect with
others
,but
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this
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will remind
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more
care
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about the relationship and be more
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than the old ways.
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