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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

#people #choices
With the advent of
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modern technology and
the
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globalization ,
plethora
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a plethora
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 of
options
are
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 available to explore nowadays . I fully agree with the aforementioned statement and will give my views in the following paragraphs. To embark on , booming population led to high rates of consumerism . As more consumers are available to explore new things in the market , manufacturers produce
myriad
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 of things to explore .
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, nowadays we have soo many
options
 in the makeup to explore .
Everyday
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 we can find some organic new brand '
products
 flooded in the shops.
Secondly
,
food
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 market has evolved manifolds as we can get
large
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 number of eatables in the market and that to of all
world wide
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 cuisine . Many people nowadays travel to different countries and explore their cuisine and
products
 which became famous worldwide and we tend to get everything under one roof.
Furthermore
, competition among markets is a foremost reason for creating more
products
 . Every company is in hoard for creating better
products
 than
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.
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,
automation
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 industry
strive
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 for creating better cars and automobiles with better features than before which ultimately leads to
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 of
options
 for a customer to explore . To sum up , in today's contemporary world , masses are
sorrounded
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surrounded
 with
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 number of
options
 to explore and experiment which can be due to above reasons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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