The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet? What are the best ways to solve them?

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In our days,

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network has changed lives of modern

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as well as created problems for them. I guess the best way to solve all questions would be not to use it at all,

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it is impossible. That’s why every problem should have its own solution.

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and the main adverse consequence of using

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internet

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addiction. Endless scrolling through social networks nourishes the brain with

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hormone of satisfaction -dopamine,

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, building an addiction.It requires a person

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be online, which can be the

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step to anxiety.

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Internet

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gives an illusion of social connection without completing the need of it. To add, the majority of

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are sitting down while using social networks,

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adopting

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lifestyle. Many more examples could be given, but the main idea is that

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problem can lead to a decrease

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physical and mental health. Reducing

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spent on socials by installing

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control on devices can help in

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situation. For more responsible users putting gadgets out of reach and forgetting about them by doing other activities can be helpful as well. Another negative point is a huge amount of information being fake. False information, fake news or even

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are destroying not only the reputation of some

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can put lives at risk. Nowadays a big number of

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do not want to waste

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on appointments with doctors when an enormous source of information is opened to their use.

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, while searching users can face fake diagnoses and not scientifically proved methods. Consuming not

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medications can worsen the situation. To prevent that,

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a mindset in which everyone would check the source or the truthfulness of the articles. Better safe than sorry. To conclude,

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internet

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is a great place consisting of amazing recourses which can be used by anyone, but its impact on

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can be detrimental and engender problems. Sadly, it is

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bullet, but approaching them one by one, they could be solved in no

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – Problems
Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

One of the first problems of the...
Another problem that needs to be considered...
A possible solution to this problem would be...
One immediate practical solution is to...

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Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet? What are the best ways to solve them?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is better for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The number of children that read for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more? (Write at least 250 words.)