Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operative rather than compete become more useful aduts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people say that

children

are the national future so educating

children

has

becoming

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more

sigificant

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significant

and more adequately. In my opinion, I do agree that a sense of competition in

children

is necessary for their development

besides

they

also

should be educated to cooperative because of the following reasons. In competitive education, it is a fact that a child should be encouraged to set a goal

annd

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and

accomplish it. When having a clear purpose to pursue, a child could be learned what to do

thing

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to get it.

For example

, swimming is a healthy sport, a kid should be known how much time to finish a swimming race to win.

Moreover

, the strengthens and weaknesses of the

children

’s body and

brainstrom

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brainstorm

would be

showed

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in the competitions and

then

their parents or teachers could base on these skills to guide their

children

contiuning

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continuing

to enhance their paths. It is an important lesson that losing is not a big problem in life should be learned for

children

to prevent anxiety and depression. For cooperation teaching, it is

also

a significant skill for kids when they play in a

team

.

Children

should be guided to become

a

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team

player

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players

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.

For instance

, football is a

team

sport

which

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that

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requires supports together to accomplish a goal.

In addition

,

children

are a good

team

player would know that to get

a

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success for

whole

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the whole

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team

is thanks to the all people effort, not

individual’s

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an individual’s

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one. Cooperative kids having supportive thinking could even help their competitors in difficult cases

instead

of winning.

This

leads to

a

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healthy competition. In conclusion, it is recognised that

children

should be encouraged to compete as well as taught to cooperate together to gain a goal. It is predicted that

children

would develop both skills to become

a

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beneficial

resident

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for

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society.