These days, scientists can tell whether a child will become criminal or not by examining the child at an age of three. Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?

Nowadays, Scientific approaches have numerous advancements in almost every corner of human life.

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, researchers by examining a child can tell if he will become a criminal or not in the future.

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, some other scientists have a contrasting opinion and say that being a criminal depends on the environment in which children are growing up. I agree strongly with the second notion, and in my essay, I will discuss my point of view. To start with, some

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that, inborn properties play an important role in future acts. They say that our inside traits shape our behaviour and

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other factors and by studying these we can foresee villain

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.

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, some Behavioral Science Researchers presume that Extroverted toddlers with a high need for excitement have a great chance of showing antisocial acts like felons.

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, Psychologists believe that most of our personalities

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at the age of seven rather than

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three. By studying an infant’s nature itself we

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predict criminal actions,

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, a three years old baby doesn’t show significant behaviour which relates to vicious acts, and

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, personality depends on environmental elements rather than

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biological factors

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family abuse, childhood training, bullying at school, weak religious beliefs, etc. It means that if a child’s father or mother always

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punished him physically, there is a good chance that the youngster becomes a felon when he grows up.

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, some research evidenced that most delinquents with high

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have suffered from destructive family relationships. There are preventive measures to stop adolescents from becoming criminals; parents must behave respectfully. The acceptance of the child by the family is essential to him. It is a pretty big step towards giving confidence to the kid and avoiding feelings of inferiority.

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, these kids don’t commit crimes to show off and hide their feelings of inferiority. In conclusion, I do completely agree with the statement that whether or not youngsters will become lawbreakers depends on their perimeters.

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