Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

In today's world, more
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more people have a concern about the
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and care about nature.
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, the pollution of rivers and other waters has become
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important topic for
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First
of all,
to begin
with, the main possible cause of
such
a development could be the
fact
that more and more factories and plants throw their wastage into the rivers.
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is because of the
fact
that not only do
this
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actions lead to a large amount of waste and plastic in the rivers but
also
it
emmites
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the
water
with poisonous liquids and mixtures.
For example
, in Ukraine, it has become prohibitive to throw any waste into the
water
since
water
supplies are becoming more and more scarce so the government has decided to intervene and prevent a larger-scale issue.
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,
this
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is likely to have devastating consequences on both fauna and humans.
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is due to the
fact
that not only do a lot of animals die because of
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in the
water
and
large
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amount of plastic but
also
since people in poor areas are likely to use
this
water
as a
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Hence
, it is likely to have a harmful impact on both
animals’
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and people's health.
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, the population of turtles has decreased significantly because of the
fact
that a lot of creatures were trapped by
the
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plastic and could not
breath
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. Eventually, to conclude, one of the possible reasons for
water
pollution may be the activities of factories and plants.
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,
this
is likely to lead to
a
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disappearance of some animal species and may have a devastating impact on human's health.
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