Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

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more people have a concern about the

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and care about nature.

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, the pollution of rivers and other waters has become

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important topic for

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of all,

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a development could be the

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that more and more factories and plants throw their wastage into the rivers.

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that not only do

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actions lead to a large amount of waste and plastic in the rivers but

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it

emmites

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emitted

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water

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with poisonous liquids and mixtures.

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, in Ukraine, it has become prohibitive to throw any waste into the

water

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since

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supplies are becoming more and more scarce so the government has decided to intervene and prevent a larger-scale issue.

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,

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appoach

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is likely to have devastating consequences on both fauna and humans.

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is due to the

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that not only do a lot of animals die because of

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in the

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and

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amount of plastic but

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since people in poor areas are likely to use

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water

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as a

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beverage

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, it is likely to have a harmful impact on both

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animals

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and people's health.

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, the population of turtles has decreased significantly because of the

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that a lot of creatures were trapped by

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plastic and could not

breath

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. Eventually, to conclude, one of the possible reasons for

water

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pollution may be the activities of factories and plants.

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,

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is likely to lead to

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disappearance of some animal species and may have a devastating impact on human's health.