Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

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more people have a concern about the

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and care about nature.

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important topic for

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First

of all,

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with, the main possible cause of

such

a development could be the

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that more and more factories and plants throw their wastage into the rivers.

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actions lead to a large amount of waste and plastic in the rivers but

also

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the

water

with poisonous liquids and mixtures.

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, in Ukraine, it has become prohibitive to throw any waste into the

water

since

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supplies are becoming more and more scarce so the government has decided to intervene and prevent a larger-scale issue.

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is likely to have devastating consequences on both fauna and humans.

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is due to the

fact

that not only do a lot of animals die because of

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in the

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amount of plastic but

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since people in poor areas are likely to use

this

water

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, it is likely to have a harmful impact on both

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and people's health.

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, the population of turtles has decreased significantly because of the

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that a lot of creatures were trapped by

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plastic and could not

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. Eventually, to conclude, one of the possible reasons for

water

pollution may be the activities of factories and plants.

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disappearance of some animal species and may have a devastating impact on human's health.

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Some people think controls should be made for the media such as newspaper to publish other people’s private lives, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think it's better t choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.