happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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period. while others believe that

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adulthood brings more happiness

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there

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greater

responsibility

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. In my opinion, I believe that young peoples, lives are happiest than adults.

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all, from an economical point of view,

teenagers

are not aware

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the conditions that

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in

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daily life.

For instance

, most

teens

do not know the facts that affect the country economy

such

as oil prices in the world.

Secondly

,

although

it is very common that young peoples do some jobs in present times, most

teenagers

do not have financial responsibilities like rents or housing costs owing to their parents afford these costs. Another good reason to state that teenager years are the best times in people's lives, is that during school periods young students are focused mainly

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the academic environment.

Consequently

,

teens

live their life in a happy scenario in which the connected activities like sportive championships music festivals and even scientific competitions represent the daily duties that young

peoples

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should deal with

Finally

, From a social perspective,

teenagers

do not fear

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social concepts or discrimination.

As a result

, they live as they consider.

For example

, most

teens

are involved in

sport

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activities, and

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organizations as well. Those relationships undoubtedly are common among young people rather than adults. In conclusion,

teenagers

years are the happiest for most people due to the activities they normally do. There are

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worries about current affairs like oil markets or political situations.

teenagers

are commonly are not influenced by social gossip.

In addition

, school times are very important in the

teens

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ages because

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positive influence that it has in young's lives.