Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In today's world, the thee of bullying is widely discussed since it has become a huge issue in a lot of educational institutions.
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an attitude towards some students is the
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that they are different from the majority of others.
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are likely to feel superior and stronger when they are a part of a group and they are considered themselves to be normal and so they begin to bully others who do not
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the characteristics.
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, the bullying emerges and the aggressiveness becomes even more fierce.
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, the statistic has shown that the major part of those who are bullied either do not have one parent or have
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that not only can it be helpful for those who are bullied but
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that
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strong and powerful over those who somehow
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behaviour is bad.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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