Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In today's world, the thee of bullying is widely discussed since it has become a huge issue in a lot of educational institutions.
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an attitude towards some students is the
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that they are different from the majority of others.
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is due to the
fact
that
children
are likely to feel superior and stronger when they are a part of a group and they are considered themselves to be normal and so they begin to bully others who do not
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, the bullying emerges and the aggressiveness becomes even more fierce.
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issue can be solved by organising special meetings with psychologists for all students.
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is because of the
fact
that not only can it be helpful for those who are bullied but
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decrease
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strong and powerful over those who somehow
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from all other people. But, one possible solution is to organise special classes where
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behaviour is bad.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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